Some
love rallied in the streets
Some love clutched to your
collars
Some love got sold
There remained love, which, yet, were to be made
Some talks
lay embarrassed by the threshold
Some talks await the
bed-lamp switched off
Some talks, gets talked
about
While, some punctuated love talks
... gradually fade
What mattered to YOU and ME
.... (Lament) 'To be or not to be?'
.... (Lament) 'To be or not to be?'
Latent calculations of Equals...huh!!
- Who reigns, What gains?
- The quotient of love OR the Remainder to it?
- My gasps of endurance OR fair chance to your
assurance?
Shall myths fill ALL the blanks?
Was I wrong to your equation of love,strife and life?
OR
Blame my hypothesis ? - 'LOVE's' p-value is less than 0.05 ?!!
Subrato: Expression of melancholy...of 'love failed' .......Well knit feeling, May 7th 2014
ReplyDeleteR: 8th May : Ironic, with a mix of kindred spirits. I shall comment the use of your words "To be or not to be?" Hamlet's poignant question evokes so much meaning. That as you ponder for an answer, it needs to pull something out of your very core in the process. Leaving no room for lies, denial, doubts, clouded judgments... just plain truth. So what the equation will now be, for you? Love as the denominator? Or Love as the subtrahend? The equation equals to a question. Your answers will mirror your own real emotions. The sum of all equations.
ReplyDeleteSevered by punctuations, the blank spaces, the incompleteness speaks volumes. I like your attempt to surrender to the idea of myth. The transformative power of myth is phenomenal. Without hiding or flaunting, myth reshapes history by making space for nature to speak. However I think that by hinting on the idea of value, you, paradoxically, have already assigned value to love. It may not be quantifiable as a commodity, but it has a value of its own which fails to submit to natural ordering of things. Loved reading the poem and walking through its multiple shades.
ReplyDeleteGK: ....it conveys, love is never complete.....there is some love always to be made...which is true....in most cases...
ReplyDelete.....tries to form a mathematical equation ...
Maybe she relates to certain events and tries to give love a quantified value....
but at the same time feels , she could be wrong in defining the equation....
And leaves the reader with more questions than answers....about the complete sanctity of the equation....